Friday, 22 March 2013

Entry

I really think that we would benefit if we had some feedback from children who we would initially target the film at. I have created a survey online to get some feedback, and I have also asked some people to watch and write back on what they think. I think we would benefit from this as we have only got criticism from an older audience, if we were to get some comments from our actual targeted audience, and their opinions I think this would really help in trying to get the best possible media product.

This is the link for the survey that I have created:

Click here to take survey

Thursday, 21 March 2013

Editing


After looking at all of these shots, I feel that they should be lighter and also, again, after speaking to our teacher we need to include more shots, to also show the power of the individual character as they are unclear within the sequence. We have decided that after every shot of someone putting on their top, we are going to show shots of each one doing their power. For example, after Bobbie puts on her shot, we will show a shot after this where she is doing something with fire, Holly with bubbles, Megan laughing, and myself with Air. I think that if we do this, it will not only make the title sequence longer, but it will also subtly show to the audience the powers that each girl has, as I have previously stated, this is unclear within it.

Editing

This is another shot that we need to film again, this is because it is not fluent enough and also after speaking to our teacher, it seems that Megan cannot take it seriously, where it was purposely intended for her to be laughing. Because of this reason, we are going to re shoot it, and Megan will just be writing her name, but because of her power of the 'Giggle' we are going to include shots of her laughing later on in the sequence instead of at this point.